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In a small town with small neighborhoods nothing really exciting happens Especially at Foley High School Foley high school is just like every other high school the same bare walls the same boring classes and the same time Although there is two exceptional things about the high school that makes it weird Make that three things One is that the school only serves peanut butter and jelly sandwiches The second is that the school doesnt let you bring your own lunch you must eat the lunch that they have there Then the third thing is that there is a locked door near the kitchens It is always locked and always will be locked Yepp Foley High School is a pretty boring place and Hannah Lox thinks so She always fells bored in that school Always had and always will continue to be The school doesnt really have the much of a dress code But all of the students seem to dress accordingly like they were forced to Hannah is wearing a sleeve-less shirt a skirt and sandals Her dark blonde hair is down She isnt the type to complain about anything or even break the rules Hannah walks down the corridors slowly like having no life She walks into the cafeteria and buys her sandwich automatically She goes and sits down Now normally she would just eat it but she doesnt she looks at it something that she never has done She takes apart the sandwich also something that she never has done She sees the peanut butter and the jelly bubbling EW She throws it across the table She had never been able to do that A few seconds afterward she suddenly feels more alive hm She wonders why suddenly that she feels like she has energy after not eating the sandwich Do YOU know
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