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It hapenned when i was still in the tender age of ten Outside it was dark and stormy which matched my mood exactly I was feeling down and bored The was no one at home with me to talk to so i was completely alone in the double storey house Mom and dad were on a vacation which left only my siblings and me But at that time as i recall they went out with their friends and left me unwanted at home It was a terrible feeling to be alone in the big dark house i imagined that everytime i turned around there would be a large hairy monster ready to pounce on me Little did i know that my childish imagination would come to life as it did on that night I was in the living room trying my best to focus on the book i had in my hand but failed to do so My eyes would dart around the heavy furnished room nervously and waiting for someone anyone to come back home As i sat there suddenly i heard one of the doors upstairs creaked open and then it slammed shut I could feel the hairs on the back of my neck standing I shut my eyes tightly and prayed that it was only the wind But somehow deep in my hear i knew that it wasnt Suddenly the wind howled outside making the iron bars rattle I was scared stiff and i could see my hand visibly shaking Then it was quiet again For around half and hour it stayed that way My head was getting heavier and i could feel sleep creeping my way Fortunately i was too sleepy to care about any horrible looking ghosts and monsters so i dragged myself up the stairs and to my room I remember that i switched on every single light in the house even the storeroom In bed i feel
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