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It was like a dog without a name or a fish without water its a feeling you want to go away but sticks and sticks like glue on paper You try to pull it off but it just ends up tearing Tearing through everything that you have worked to make right A young girl Christine by name walks this shadow everyday People point and laugh as she walks down the halls they dont see the good inside of her and they only see her faults They dont call her by name but instead thats the girl who got raped Deep down she wants to cry but miraculously keeps her head up high she knows what happened and their nuisance hasnt phased her Vanessa her best friend sticks by her even through the dark clouds She knows Christine is in pain and she doesnt have to scream it out loud Christine come with me I want to show you something he said Why did I listen she thinks everyday Just around this corner a little closer a little closer he excitedly said I was so stupid I should have known hed do this to me why didnt I just run away The noise in the background drowned out all the shrieks Homerun she heard every-one scream Another point for the team and the score was now 14 to 6 It was a well-known fact that Florence High School had the best baseball team as well as football team This night would ruin baseball for Christine all together She was to be cheering but would not show The girls wondered why but didnt stop to look they never even called If only they looked behind the stands in the bushes they would see a girl begging Please dont please She lay there violated and feeling helpless like everyone was against her and they had to know this was happening to her They just had to know He
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