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A shadow fell over my doorway A man of great width and stature stood leaning down to look into my face A pitiful scream erupted from my throut I scrambled back and reached behind me for the brass doorknob never taking my blue eyes off the giant of a man He reached his hand out for mine A bead of salty sweat dripped from my forehead onto my shirt Panic glistened in my eyes His hand was an inch away from me Just in time I pushed the door open and pulled myself in to the warm open house I call home I Felt safe Realizing the man was outside I decided to wait on the ground I heard a rapping at the door and soon freight filled my heart Go away I whispered almost silently leave me alone The knocking stopped and relief soon swarmed over me like a cool blanket I stood and was on my way to the gleaming kitchen when I heard the creak of a door opening Knowing no one was home panic filled my eyes and ears again The sound of footsteps came from the back room where the back door stood I ruffled and squeaked a bit Running to the closet door I pulled on the handle just in time I saw a huge shadow fall through the kitchen doorway as I slipped inside the dark room I waited in the silence hearing nothing seeing nothing A faint sound came from the other side of the doorway and I heard footsteps going climbing the stairs The last step creaked as the man stepped on it I waited deciding it was safe to leave my well placed hiding space Opening the door I listened for any sound None came to my ears I silently tiptoed across the carpeted front hall and into the kitchen The phone stood
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