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Anna was walking home when the storm broke out Where could she find shelter There was a house only 50 meters away Her dad was telling her many times she should not be going to that old home because it was not a good place to be She asked him why He never did give her a good answer just that it was too far from the house and the cave in the area But Anna had not have a choice and decided to find shelter there The house was over 300 years old The floor looked like it had been replaced but was in rough shape Anna pulled up three boards and I noticed an object that was kind of buried in dust or dirt She reached down to pick the object up and saw it was a ring This ring had been under this floor for a long time it had a red stone in the center The design on the ring was swirls around the stone with what looked like lace work reaching up to the stone Anna put it in her pocket thinking it would be a nice addition to her antique collection As she was walking through the house she suddenly smelt strong perfumes although the house was abandoned for a long time As she was walking around she kept getting this feeling some one was in the building besides her She tried to persuade herself that it was only her imagination when she heard a whimpering sound Then she heard it again and again as though some one was crying or something It was getting on her nerves so she walked around once more She was in the front room looked around then turned to head back to the kitchen She looked down the hall way and into the back room Then she saw a young lady wearing a black dress Anna wanted to touch her dress to
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