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My fingers grappled the jagging rocks and I frantically pulled myself up onto dry land The rigid waters ebbed and smashed mercilessly on my back almost putting me into hyperthermia Spasms wrecked by muscles and I limped sub-consciously into a large cave As I crawled more into the cavern I realized that the vicinity was losing its luminosity I was given two choices - stay and die of cold or enter and risk my life I was not one who gave up easily hence I ventured deeper into the rock-strewn cavern As I was shuffling into the cave with both my palms magnetized onto the caverns even walls I heard absolutely nothing but my breaths and footsteps It was torturous to invade into an alien land and not having sight Suddenly a flock of winged-creatures - most probably bats - swept across the apex of the cave producing screeching shrieks that rang through the whole cavern I knelt down with both my hands covering my head and kept absolutely still The raging horde finally subsided and everything was unruffled again I continued to venture even deeper into the tunneling grotto and unknowingly realized that it was getting much warmer Weird thoughts revolved round my mind - Trolls witches minotaurs devils How absurd I whispered to myself Then a crackling sound of fire became apparent was I hobbled across the pebbly ground The sound of dripping water was also heard I tip-toed in consternation towards the sounds and saw a thin crevice that allowed me to peer into a large hall I gleamed into the crevice and saw something absolutely mind-blowing My eyes widened Paradise Paradise I exclaimed Out of the blue I heard a snarling groan Chills shattered down my spine instantaneously and every strand of hair on my body rose The groan reminded me monsters or maybe just humans but cannibals I was lost To my horror footsteps - that of a
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