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A Critical Analysis of the Novel Dougy Written by James Moloney

This is an analytical essay in which the author delves into the novel "Dougy" written by James Moloney. The author looks at how the text is used to explain the difficulty aboriginals have had adapting to modern life. The author discusses the relationship between Dougy and his sister Gracey.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Your essay has a logical organization. The purpose of your essay is fairly clear, but clarity could be improved by creating a thesis statement that is more specific. Currently, it feels like there are two thesis statements making the goal of your paper a bit more confusing. In one place you say the essay will discuss how the text is manipulated and in another place you say the essay will discuss Dougy and Gracey's relationship. As written, the reader is left with a lot of questions, but I feel as if much of this will be resolved once you replace asterisks with information. Make sure that every time you use specific information from the text that you appropriately cite it to avoid plagiarism issues. A are only a few minor formatting issues that need to be resolved but there are a lot of grammar and punctuation issues that need to be resolved. Make sure that the paper goes through a round of proofreading to resolve issues like these."

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