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A Critical Response of Janet Halley's Opinion on Liberal Feminism

This is a reflective essay in which the author discusses a manuscript written by Janet Halley about feminism. The author highlights concepts that they were unaware of found confusing such as the theory about the diversity of women the huge role feminists have had in constructing society.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a good job presenting your perspective on feminism and feminist issues. You have also done a good job presenting evidence that supports your views. Currently, the essay is lacking both an introduction and a conclusion. Because of this, it is not clear what the main goal of your essay is supposed to be. It is not clear if you are supposed to be summarizing a text, presenting an opinion, or critically analyzing a movement. All of these have different ways in which they need to be approached. There are a number of sentence structure, punctuation, and grammar errors in the essay that need to be fixed. To improve the flow and readability of your paper, create smooth transitions when you present new topics and ideas. This allows the reader to understand the relationships that exist between different concepts. "

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