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A Critique of Warsan Shire's Poem "No One Leaves Home"

This literary analysis describes Warsan Shires' "No One Leaves Home Unless Home is the Mouth of a Shark," focusing on how the poem criticizes racism and human rights violations.
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Christina's feedback:

"You included a good amount of detail from the poem itself to support the claims you make about it, but the way your ideas are organized makes your paper feel disjointed at times. In the introduction, it's a good idea to include a thesis statement that lets the reader know the purpose of your paper and what will be discussed for the remainder of the paper. Your opening sentence serves this purpose to a degree, but it's better to hook the reader, then provide background information, and then weave your thesis in at the end of the first paragraph. With regard to organization, be sure to review the points you made in the earlier paragraphs in your conclusion and give your essay a sense of finality. This will let the reader know the takeaway of your work as a whole. Regarding the format, a suggestion would be to review your guidelines for MLA to get a full understanding of paragraph indentation, everything needed on the first page (like the title, last name, and page number), in-text citations, and the citations on your works cited page. You would also benefit from a round of proofreading to ensure all issues with punctuation and spelling are resolved before submitting your work."

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