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My First Time at the Drag Strip I was eight years old on my way to a place my father said I would enjoy I had no idea where we were going to end up although I was still excited I was so excited that the hair in the back of my neck was standing up and I was speechless To make the time go by quicker I played a game with my self on the way there counting bed trucks that had passed by We never went out as a family much so when we did it would always be exciting for me The car ride there seemed to take a lifetime however it only took us thirty minutes When we finally got there my father looked at me and said we are here in a quiet and sneaky voice I jumped up quickly and took a quick look around and I saw trees Trees I whispered to myself and then a loud deep rumble shook the inside of my body It felt like there was a earthquake going on in my body That is when I looked to my right and saw a car a beautiful sparkling blue GTO with a large blower resting above the chrome and highly detailed engine I had never seen such a beauty in my life The sun shining on it made it sparkle like a diamond Just beyond the car were some off-white old wooden bleachers and beyond them was a beautiful sight It was a long black road with two lanes At the begging of the lanes were lights and the two lanes faced the same way Its a drag strip I shouted I had seen them on TV before but I couldnt believe we were actually at a drag strip nor did I even know we had one in Washington State It was a beautiful blue sky and there was not a
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