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A day Ill never forget At the young age of 51 my best friend Mary A Tolbert my grandmother was taken away from me by a sudden massive heart attack Living in Sacramento I had just left my grandmothers house Earlier that Monday evening in September my grandmother had just finished babysitting me at the age of ten I gave my grandmother a big wet kiss on the cheek while she was lying on the snow-white velvet couch trimmed in baby blue As she was watching her favorite game show The Wheel Of Fortune Ill see you later I told her as I walked out the door Although she did look a bit tired I assumed it was from dealing with me all day an energetic ten year old She convinced me she was feeling fine Early that Tuesday morning is one that Ill never forget I was awakened at 300 AM by some woman who sounded like her voice was hoarse I didnt realize it was my mother she was informing me that she thought my grandmother was dead I wasnt fully awaken yet but coherent enough to understand the words that came out of her mouth Like a skyrocket I sat straight up in my bed STOP LYING I yelled to my Mom as she assured me she was very serious At that moment I demanded we call 911 My mother and I got dressed in thirty seconds flat
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