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I stood by my door listening to them scream at each other Glaring at them while they fought Felt that oh so familiar revulsion and pain Would they ever stop Some nights I cried myself to sleep just to drown out the infinite thoughts of just how much she was aching inside If I ever despised anyone in my life Id have to say it was my father He ruined my mothers life From the despondency he caused her to the neglected nights she waited I had never envisioned anyone as recluse as she always was The only thing I could do was induce her and tell her that everything would be all right Although I knew nothing would be all right It was a Saturday night and I was packing my things to head over to my grandmas house As I meandered up my stairs I sensed the heavy smell of my fathers cologne I stood by his door and saw that he was all dressed up wearing a light steel gray blouse and black pants As he tried to attach a silver chain around his neck he requested my assistance I sauntered in to his bedroom and wondered where my mother was Then I saw him snatch the keys off the top of the television as if he were in a rush to go somewhere I casually asked him where he was disappearing to tonight as usual Anthony is having a party so he invited me over Confused I questioned Wheres mommy I had thought that she was taking me to my grandmas As I finished attaching the chain around his neck he retorted I dont know I wandered around my house for a couple of minutes realizing that I hadnt checked the bathroom As I ambled in I saw her sitting on the toilet hunched over with her head in her hands sobbing without a sound I knew why she
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