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It was a black convertable Mercedez 600sel with licence plates PW2020 Robert Dupond parked the car in the road outside the American Club He was still in his car feeling nervous and restless with a little hesitation He took a deep breath and got off his car He could see himself leading a new life with all the money and the power he would inherit from his Big uncle Only the daughter of his Big Uncle Venesa Rosaldi stood in his way He sensed his heart poundering in his chest at the same time he became a little excited about the new life he would have at the end of it all He dreamed of getting everyhing he wanted a red Ferrari a brand new mansion in Beverly Hills and all the beautiful chics Venesa was sitting on the terrace in her tennis whites her blonde hair pulled back from her forehead with a broad white NIKE sweat-band She was having her usual lime juice with soda water She always surprised him Unless you got close enough she would be mistaken for a woman ten years younger than her real age Robert was wearing a maroon double-breasted velvet Gucci suit a black silk shirt and a pair of wool trousers with slim leather belt Heads turned as he walked through the lounge with an expressionless face He put his brief case by the French doors to the terrace and walked outside up to her She looked up Did you have a good day she said as if she was expecting him He was taken aback but he tried to stay calm Just a little sight-seeing you know how it is He always tried to avoid telling Venesa about the business matters what are you doing here she asked I was test driving my car and I just decided to stop by and say hi to you he replied Hows father she asked looking away
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