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It was a beautiful day picture perfect complete with blue skies and a warm breeze on our faces as we all stood outside nervously waiting for our names to be called It was graduation day a day i thought I would never get to see but there I was in my cap and gown looking out into a sea of parents friends and relatives remembering just how far I had come When I first entered high school I performed well enough to meet my parents expectations meaning I did the minimum work I needed to complete to pass the course But then something inside me changed I started skipping classes getting into trouble and hanging out with the wrong crowd By my sophmore year I was failing all my classes The trouble I was getting into also had a huge effect on my relationship with my parents Instead of seeing them as the loving and caring people they are I decided they were my number one enemies We fought constantly and sometimes even physically I ran away more times that I can remember only to be dragged back home a few days later by the police Eventually my out of control behavior caught up with me and as a last resort to straighten me out my parents sent me away to a boarding school for troubled girls in Boston It was there that I realized just how lucky I really was and how selfish I had been acting Some of the girls there had no one and nothing but the clothes on their backs to call their own One of the counselors there named Rudy took a special interest in my case and me We started meeting together on a daily basis and he set a goal for me to get my life together and be back in regular school in time for graduation To this day Im not sure why Rudy chose to
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