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My shoe is located in my large outdoorsy messy basement with my dogssmell lingering throughout the air Point of view works the best becausenothing in my room is moving To the left of my room is a thick white rug with some messy shoes and aflower covered pantry curtain The red lilies dwell on the curtain tothe food filled pantry The slight opening makes it so you can see thetasty orange bag of Cheetos The rug occupies seven pairs of shoescluttered on the rug The wall is colored hunter green The wall closestobtains some gold hooks for coats Around the tall pantry lies a doorleading to the rest of the house and next to the door lies the dog bedareaStraight ahead on the far wall lie coats on tall but slender hooks thatcurve back The new nice looking coats lie here Underneath the coatrests the smelly dog bed There my dog Babe who is a black Lab buriesherself into her bed She is old and gray not so much her original colorblack To the right is a wooden closet with hunting clothes insideWhen looking at the closet to the right wall is the creatively handcarved wooden piano The hand crafted beautiful piano creates the mainsource of this room The wooden piano exists beautifully underneath alighted window Outside of the window remain many trees and a boat Theboat is a camouflage duck boat that lies on a trailer Next to the boatlies a cedar fence that separates my neighbors house and my houseBelow the window two clay handcrafted people that my grandmother madeand colored stand tall on the ledge To the right of the piano theshoes clutter up clutter up a rugThe pairs of shoes lie perfectly straight in their rows and look liketwo straight lines The red and white pair of Nike high tops The dirtypairs go to the closet to the wall The matching green carpet matchesthe walls that are hunter green The rug
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