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When my brother 29 offered to take me rock climbing I was thrilled to go We left our house at about 1000 in the morning and started down the highway When we pulled off to the rock climbing site on the side of the road we were both surprised to find that there were no other cars parked there Normally this turn off was packed with cars with people climbing the Falls Although we were both happy that there was no one else around to interfere there was a lingering feeling of dread that if something went wrong there wouldnt be anybody else around to help out We both got out of the car and decided to go on down against our better judgment The trail down was a steep runoff ditch about two feet wide surrounded with scrub brush While on the way down I was thinking both about how bad my legs were getting cut from the brush and about not slipping on the sandy trail When we reached the bottom there were signs of past water flow during the winter months We crossed over the rocky river bed and headed to the recreational climbs off to the left Scott went up first so I could watch and get a feel for the grip locations When he reached the top about 30 feet high he came back down on a side path and said Your turn I got up on the wall and was doing fine until I got about three quarters of the way up I heard him yell up Hold on while I go back up I pressed my self against the wall so I could relax my arms while he climbed the path back up When he reached the top he laid down on the granite slab and stuck his head over the side I started climbing up again but got stuck about two feet from the edge I couldnt
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