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A Description of My Personality Traits

This reflective essay describes several elements of the writer's personality, such as being outgoing, hardworking, independent, and organized.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Not sure what I'd do without @Kibin
- Alfredo Alvarez, student @ Miami University
Exactly what I needed.
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Christina's feedback:

"While you did well giving the reader information regarding your personality traits, your essay would be more effective and easier to read with some more work on the organization. Be sure you are offering a thesis statement in your introduction, letting the reader know what you will be discussing in the body paragraphs. As it stands right now, the reader has to read the entire essay to figure out what the real focus of your writing is. Breaking your writing into distinct paragraphs, each focused on one topic, would also be helpful. This includes the introduction, body paragraphs that will further support each main point you make in your thesis, and a conclusion that summarizes your body paragraph and gives a takeaway to the reader. A solid round of editing would be beneficial to ensure the issues of grammar, run-on sentences, and capitalization, and preposition usage are resolved before submitting your work."

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