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Birthday Bash Mike my friend always had the most superb birthday parties Mikes dad was a beta tester for Nintendo therefore allowing Mike to always have the best and newest video games Also Mike had a gigantic house and an enormous backyard His house was the perfect environment for hide and seek because it offered numerous excellent hiding places His backyard had sufficient amount of area to allow the kids to play soccer and football He also had his own jungle gym It had a plastic slide which was very fast monkey bars a sand pit and a lookout post Mike had all these fantastic toys and he was a nice guy allowed him to have the most amazing birthday parties Every advantage has a disadvantage The disadvantage to Mikes birthday parties was his next-door neighbors child James James was the most spoiled kid in the world He got anything he wanted and all the parents thought he was a model child and Mikes parent forced his to invite James every year Every year he did something to ruin Mikes party because he despised Mike Last year he broke Mikes computer by putting a virus on it The year before that he accidentally spilt coke all over Mikes Nintendo and his video game cartridges And the year before that he stepped on Mikes birthday cake Today was my unlucky day Today was a day in my life that I would never forget It was Mikes birthday he was turning 6 We had bought him a neuf gun for his present As usual James was there I went to go play on the jungle gym because almost everybody went outside James and some other kids were already playing the jungle gym I wanted to use the slide so I walked over to the jungle gym I started to climb up the ladder James stopped tormenting the children on the swings and walked over to the
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