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Are we solving youth violence by sending minors to jail in adult prisons In the article Tough Justice for Juveniles author Edward Humes discusses the underlining problems with the Juvenile Justice System In this article Humes claims in paragraph 2 that Our national fixation with meting out adult punishments to young criminals has blinded us to the underling crisisthe juvenile systems shocking inability to impose meaningful penalties or even supervision on offenders before they become the predators we so fear Personally I agree with the Humes the Juvenile Justice System is so readily willing to punish young criminals to the furthest extent of the law In most cases without even considering theyre prior criminal history or the crimes that they are currently being processed Humes illustrated examples in paragraphs 4 5 6 and 7 by discussing two youth offenders and the punishment that they where sentenced to after being processed through the current laws used by the Juvenile Court System In this article the author clearly illustrates an appeal to authority by displaying a rational tone that isnt offensive and the author appears to be personally knowledgeable about the subject matter making his views creditable The author also clearly expresses a genuine concern for the subject matter being discussed and offers suggestions on how to correct the problem illustrated in the claim In paragraph 11 Humes stated We can keep tinkering with the laws so we can ship more and younger children to adult court but this does nothing to return juvenile courts to their original mission to deal with young people before they become hardened criminals I believe that Humes is trying to express a concern that most people have surrounding youth crime which is the fact that we dont want to send children to adult jail so that they can learn to become better criminals I also agree with Humes in respect that there is a need to correct how we punish children
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