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This essay is a true story on my relationship with an abusive boyfriend This essay was to describe a person in your life that changed you some how This is detailed look into my relationship with this guy and some of things that he did to me while we were together Its a personal essay on an abusive relationship Mr Perfect Three years ago a certain boy caught my eye a seemingly perfect boy he was funny cool and cute I was completely wrong about him and in for a huge wake up call Through out your life there are many people you encounter that might seem to be great but turn out to be your worst nightmare At first Mike was great he was polite caring and could not be more perfect He was the best friend of my friends boyfriend so we spent a lot of time together In fact too much time Around this time mike started to change- for the worst Mike was like that bad taste in your mouth in the morning before you brush your teeth We often fought when I could not hang out with him and he would break up with me No big problem though I thought he was just very angry and needed some cool-down time Soon after we would break up he would come back to me apologizing and asking me to forgive him and that I should take him back Stupid me What is important to know is that I was the type of girl who everyone liked- Cool confident funny smart and attractive a genuinely good person all round Little did I know Mike was somehow gaining control over me He would make me feel guilty when I wanted to have a girls night out But I kept convincing myself he was just really insecure and somehow thought he would lose me I cared about Mike and I hated
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