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October first 2010 my heart stopped yet life wasnt taken away from me I was diagnosed with ms multiple sclerosis Ms has bettered me tremendously provided me with encouragent and faith that I could accomplish anything it only takes hard work As a child I was always happy Growing up I loved school grades were always important outside of loving school I loved and cared for all Once I hit puberty and shot through teenage years I became a person of attitude As far as others I cared little to none school and grades traveled far from my mind When noticed my counselor teachers and mom asked why I remained silent and Kept hidden secrets but to myself I knew the reason I posed as a none caring person and began to slack it was only because I felt as if I couldnt accomplish what I was asked Tenth grade is when my short comings began Attitude and failings as well that was the year I decided I rather fit in and strive for a normal status than do work it was obvious I really didnt care about anything academic For every progress and report card there followed a very mediocre performance After noticing my mother didnt accept either to stop myself from drowning in disappointment I absolutely gave up all efforts During my eleventh year I actually started to try once more except all seemed to be flawed yet again August I was extremely excited about returning to school another step to advancing in the world at least thats what I thought September fifth 2010 I noticed something was wrong with me my vision became of poor quality I unintentionally loss focus on work had poor balance and gained shortness of breath very quickly One day after school I attended marching band practice Everything was smooth sailing until I went outside I was assigned pushups and laps normally I
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