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A Discussion About the Dangers of Misinformation on Social Media

This essay deals with how information is spread online. The student argues that social media plays a major role in spreading misinformation due to echo chambers and lack of fact-checking.
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Bob's feedback:

"The concerns you raise about how information is disseminated on social media are valid and important. However, the presentation of those ideas needs some work in order to get it through to your audience. Your introduction meanders before getting to your topic, leaving the reader to guess what the main idea of the essay is. Many of the ideas you present lack clarity. For example, in the second sentence of your second paragraph, you make reference to "the idea" but you don't discuss what ideas you are referencing. This type of issue is repeated frequently throughout the paper. Consider having the essay read closely by a peer or editor to identify problems with clarity, sentence structure, context, and word choice."

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