A Discussion About Virtual Film Actors as Portrayed in the Film S1m0ne
This essay discusses the idea of virtual film actors. The student examines S1m0ne, a film about one such actor, and concludes that virtual actors are unlikely to achieve the same status as human actors.
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"This is an interesting topic and you cover several aspects of it well, especially the slow evolution of actors' status and autonomy. You make several broad claims that should be supported with examples and/or citations to lend credibility to your arguments.
Your introduction seems to indicate that the focus of your paper will be on whether virtual actors will eventually have the same impact as human actors. While this is addressed, the bulk of the paper strays away from that topic. See if you can tie that idea into your supporting paragraphs.
There is a transition in your intro paragraph from a discussion of the film to a comment about entertainment in the real world. The transition is unclear, so it may seem to the reader that you are still discussing the film itself.
There is a fair amount of repetition throughout the paper that should be pared down. There are also issues with awkward word choices that impact clarity."
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