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How the CDA and COPA Misunderstood the Internet

This argumentative essay on the early days of internet censorship takes a position against what the student describes as unnecessary efforts that respond to a moral panic rather than the reality of internet usage. The student discusses PICS, COPA, and the CDA.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"This is a complex topic and you approach it with an attention to detail that suits its complexity. Keeping this in mind, you will want to work carefully with the higher-order concerns to make sure paragraph structure, organization, and density facilitate the reader's ability to follow the various points. Another area that can be finetuned with this goal in mind will be in the diction and syntax. I notice shifts into fairly casual modes that don't really suit the project tonally or in making sure information delivery is direct and efficient.

A major issue creating a barrier to readability and clarity is the absence of quotation marks and apostrophes. This seems to be a file formatting issue rather than a mechanics issue, so make sure any final submission preserves these crucial elements. Otherwise, the reader can't tell when a quotation begins and ends, causing a lot of problems with ethos, clarity, and logic."

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