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"Your paper is off to a good start. From the get-go, an essential part of a paper is its organization. An essay needs to be well-organized so that it is clear what its purpose is and that you remain focused on that purpose throughout the writing. You have a lengthy introduction that ends with a thesis statement that gets lost. The introduction should provide the most basic background information on the topic and end with a strong thesis statement that gives a basic summary of what the reader should expect to read about. You could move much of your introduction into a second paragraph to make it more concise. To round out the paper, the conclusion should summarize the main points you made in the document's body and relate them to your thesis statement. There are aspects of the content of your paper that are pretty good and other aspects that are lacking. You are going into a significant description of some propositions, and other descriptions leave the reader confused. It also seems that you might have missed describing a proposition altogether. While the formatting of the paper is neat, it is inconsistent. Consistent formatting helps with reading comprehension and writing cohesion. Last, you have a decent handle on writing conventions. It would help you resolve some spelling and punctuation errors to improve your writing."
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(Kibin, 2024)
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Kibin. (2024). A discussion on artificial intelligence. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/a-discussion-on-artificial-intelligence-sXr0LoBH
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