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Nina Hallets Ultimate Comeback Nina looked up around the arena Amongst the crowd she saw her parents and her three best friends Alice Nicholas and Jake They were all cheering for her holding banners and waving their arms in the air Three years after working for sAssy Nina took another chance at swimming This was itNinas chance to show off her skillsthis was the extreme comeback This time she wasnt going for Gold or Silver just a chance to be recognised again Nina jumped into the water looked at her target and got into her position Jake Dad the crowd Block them all out the only thing standing between me and the finish line is the water She looked across to see who was in lane number four a fifteen year old girl named True She wasnt much older than Nina when she had first begun swimming at competitions The gun went off with a bang and releasing her tight grip on the wall Nina lunged back This is a good start Flowing strides within the waterNina looked across and saw True racing up ahead She reminds me of when I was fifteenso competitive and determinedShes got Gold for sureHalf way there Nina turned her body around and began to swim the last 50 metres At least four more strides and Ninas race would be over Three Two Nina stopped She touched the wall and heard the timer beep She took off her goggles waved to the crowd and looked over at the board Her old record was still there no one had been able to beat it but still she hadnt come first My Ultimate Comeback By Nina Hallet At one stage in my life my ultimate dream was to swim very very fast and to be the number one athlete in the world I found myself struggling between schoolwork family life and the desire to satisfy myself and
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