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A Discussion on Plato's Views on Soul and Politics in The Republic

This is a philosophy essay. The author focuses on Plato and his views on the soul. The author also highlights how Plato relates his theory about an individual's soul to his idea of political order.
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"Your paper is off to an excellent start. It is very neatly formatted, which is essential for writing cohesiveness and reading comprehension. Also, since you have clearly stated what you will write about in your introduction, it is clear what the purpose of your paper is and that you stayed focused on that purpose throughout your writing. Overall, the content of your essay is quite good. I recommend that you use less of a conversational tone throughout it. You can accomplish this by removing words such as "I" and "we" and making your transitions sound more scholarly. Also, consider combining ideas into one sentence rather than making repetitive lists. Doing this will help you create a concise thesis statement in your introduction. While your paper starts with an introduction, it does not end with a conclusion. Instead, a conclusion summarizing the main points made in the document's body and relating them to the thesis statement will show readers that you remained focused on your purpose throughout your writing. Last, you have a good handle on writing conventions. Some places could benefit from proofreading due to word choice and punctuation errors."

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