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There once was a girl who had two cats These two cats were very different from each other One cat was young and sleek He had far-reaching whiskers and a long lush coat He was known throughout the neighborhood for his beautiful coat and his prowess as a hunter The other cat was rather old She was not quite as beautiful as she was in her youth In fact she was rather overweight Despite her age and obesity she was known as the sweetest cat around She would never pass up a scratch behind her ear from a person The girl adored both of her cats She always made sure that she showed each cat an equal amount of affection She did not want either of the cats to feel that she loved the other more If one cat sat in her lap for a while and allowed her to pet it she would make sure to pet the other cat soon after When it was time for the cats to be fed the girl would feed a different cat first each time If she spoke sweetly to one cat she would always follow by adoring the other cat too The girl believed that all of the special measures she took ensured that the cats would not compete for her affections Both of these cats loved the girl fiercely The girl was unaware of the conflicts that constantly raged between the two cats concerning her affections The cats hid the animosity they felt for each other from the girl The arguments never began until the girl left home When the girl left home in the morning the cats would start up their arguments I have you know I intended to sleep curled beside the left leg the young cat said to the old cat Well you should not have stayed outside so late You know how hard it is for her to fall back asleep
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