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One summer my family and I were going on vacation to Disney World This time we were going with my extended family from Ohio I have many cousins my age whom I dont get to see very often When my family from Ohio arrived at out home in Jacksonville Florida we loaded the vehicles with our things and prepared for the trip Before we left for Orlando we stopped at Atlantic Beach to swim We always enjoyed swimming because Ohio has no beaches and it wasnt very often when my family could visit us After the beach my dad who is in the Navy took us on base and gave us a tour on his guided missile cruiser ship My cousins had a blast because they had never been on a naval base My dad took us into the dark radar rooms which looked like a room full of video games There were many war simulation games we could play My dad brought us out on the helicopter hanger and the flight deck to see the missile bays on the front of the deck He also answered many of my cousins questions about his job and the ship Our family drove two big vans to Orlando We brought many games to keep us entertained while on the trip The trip for us seemed so long because we were very anxious to be in Disney World We kept walkie-talkies to keep communications lines open It was entertaining to talk across the highway to the other van When we arrived in Orlando we stayed a hotel with two connecting rooms so the boys could have a room to themselves We had a little pizza party that night for dinner The boys side had a very large cooler full of ice and sodas When we finished dinner it was time for lights out One of my cousins snuck down to the cooler and took some ice It was
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