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Hi my name is William Wallace Im 14 years old and I live in Britain Im going to America on a boat that will drop us off at Ellis Island Im keeping a journal throughout my voyage to America because one day I hope to send it back to Britain so all my relatives can read what it was like My parents cant come with me to America because they only have enough money for one ticket and they told me that they want a better life for me so they are only sending me Tomorrow will be my first day on my voyage and tonight I need to pack and get all belongings for the trip My aunt Marry is gonna be there waiting for me I cant wait until I get to America and I am so excited about the trip My parents have given me 15 incase of emergency and told me that no mater what people say to you never spend that money on anything that is not mandatoryWell Im on the boat now but it seemed like it took me forever to get on it All morning I stood online waiting and waiting when realized that the reason I was waiting online was because I had to fill out a Question sheet If I remember there were 29 or 30 questions on the sheet but I think it was 29 every immigrant that was going to America had to fill out the sheet Im not too sure what it was for but there were questions such as How much money are you carryingWhat nationality are you and What is your native language and a lot more stuff like that At first I was scared to leave my parents and my home country because Im now all on my own and I have no one to help me threw life for the next couple of days To tell you the truth
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