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If one day our planet were to be visited by aliens of a highly civilized planet would you be proud to show them our world or ashamed of all thats wrong with it Although I am proud of all the technology we have acquired I would have to say I am overall ashamed of the world of poverty crime and hate that we live in As I took the aliens around the globe I would obviously be proud to show them everything weve accomplished From our vehicles airplanes and even spaceships to hospitals and laboratories that have come up with cures for diseases and computers and the age of electronics these are all things to be proud of After we left this tour of our major accomplishments there would still be so much for them to see some of which we arent too proud of We walk through the streets of a city in the US and the aliens spot a homeless man begging for food and money The aliens are shocked that everyone in our great society doesnt have a home They were even more shocked at the number of people starving and without homes as we toured a middle-eastern country They couldnt understand how governments could be so wealthy yet leave their people to starve to death I had no explanation for them other than greed They didnt understand what greed was Where theyre from everyone works together so that all are taken care of With the aliens confused we moved on Back in the US we took a tour of a small country town A drunken man with his whiskey bottle at hand yelled and screamed at his wife while three young children watched with glazed eyes He began hitting her and threw her against the wall The woman tried to run and her angry husband drew out a gun and said if she didnt stop he would shoot A few moments
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