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Me the New Package A brisk rap is heard on your front door As a habitual reflex you go to the door to see who is there Before your eyes stands the Publishers Clearing House Prize Patrol waiting to present you with ten million dollars This was to become your most life changing experience Unlike this hypothetical situation suggests I did not win ten million dollars but similarly I won my life The most special life changing experience happened to me when I became a Christian Through the immensity of this experience my salvation has fortified my moral integrity and interaction with other people Let us start by picturing the old me successful in school outgoing semi-athletic and an overall nice guy Before I became a Christian I was not a patient cool tempered person The littlest things would enrage me In addition the only reasons I had to make moral choices were based solely on what my parents had taught me Dont get me wrong my life up to my salvation was pleasant but I always felt there was something missing Two years ago that something took over my mind and body filling that empty spot in my life Because of my Christianity I have the confidence in my heart to believe that the choices I make are good for me and the people affected by my choices I have noticed that it is no longer necessary for me to consciously think about right and wrong Christianity allows me to live my life without doubting my moral integrity Living as a Christian I no longer want to lie mostly because I realize there is a Big Guy watching everything I do holding my accountable Christianity has had a profound impact on me morally however it is in my interaction with others that Christianity has impacted me the most
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