A Review of "Race and Recruitment in World War I" in the Canadian Historical Review

In this essay, the student finds the main claims of "Race and Recruitment in World War I: Enlistment of Visible Minorities in the Canadian Expeditionary Force" by James W. St. G. Walker convincing. The student examines Walker's writing style and use of evidence in advancing the argument that the Canadian government's actions contributed to characterizations of WWI as a "white man's war."

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"The higher-order concerns of this review are strong and show your engagement with Walker's article. You clearly outline your purpose, efficiently describe the text's main ideas, and provide critical commentary on Walker's work.

The main areas of focus to move this piece forward will be in lower-order concerns. Among these tasks should be proofreading, reducing the use of passive voice except when necessary to make a rhetorical or analytical point, and revising to eliminate redundant phrases and take control of organization at the sentence-to-sentence level. Polishing these elements up will make sure your presentation matches the strengths of the argumentation."

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("A Review of "Race and Recruitment in World War I" in the Canadian Historical Review.")

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"A Review of "Race and Recruitment in World War I" in the Canadian Historical Review." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/a-review-of-race-and-recruitment-in-world-war-i-in-the-canadian-historical-review-i1201S6T

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