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Why Poverty in Latin America Affects Women Disproportionately

This essay discusses the issue of women in poverty in Latin America. The student notes that women have fewer opportunities for employment and tend to earn less than their male counterparts.
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Bob's feedback:

"You make a lot of good points about how poverty affects women. While the body of your paper presents your case well, the introduction and conclusion could use some work.

Your introduction makes some broad statements that are difficult to follow and should be substantiated. You eventually narrow your focus to Latin America, but it's unclear whether the previous statements refer to the situation around the world in your area of focus.

Your conclusion brings up some new angles to consider. This should be avoided in your conclusion; instead, you should be reinforcing and wrapping up the arguments you've made throughout the paper.

There are small but frequent errors in word usage and sentence construction that should be addressed with a thorough round of proofreading."

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