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An Interpretation of Arguments on the Existence of God From Hume and Aquinas

This paper presents the argument of if God exists or not. The author highlights the opinions of St. Thomas Aquinas and how the philosopher established five criteria through Summa Theologica as well as David Hume's rebuttals and his work The Natural History of Religion.
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"This paper is off to a good start, and with a little bit of work invested into all aspects of the paper, you will significantly improve it. The elements of the paper that need the least amount of work are content, formatting, and conventions. In terms of your content, you provide a lot of specific information and include many advanced ideas and reasoning. Since you have written about such a complex and complicated topic, I advise that you figure out a way to clarify the subject for people who might not be familiar with the argument.

For the most part, the formatting is excellent. This is important for reading comprehension and the cohesion of the writing. I recommend that you straighten up the bibliography, though. It would help to use hanging indents, so where one reference ends and another begins is apparent. You also have an excellent handle on writing conventions. There are minimal errors scattered throughout your writing that you can resolve through a round of proofreading.

The things that need the most work are organization and focus/purpose. It is not clear from either the introduction or the conclusion what the paper's goal is. You can resolve this by including a thesis statement that states the purpose of your essay and how you will achieve it. The conclusion should then summarize the main points you made in the body of the document and relate them to the thesis statement. This will make the purpose of your writing more clear and will show the reader that you are focused on that purpose."

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