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Bridget's feedback:
"You follow the historical narrative in a thorough and engaging manner. For a more robustly academic discussion, I recommend more use of sources when describing broad swaths of behavior ("preferred open to formal marriages," for example, might take advantage of demographic data, as available). Your current use of sources is solid, though; I do notice some moments where, perhaps due to formatting issues, certain claims or quotes are not clearly cited. This will be related to a more general issue with the formatting, which is rather disruptive in this current draft due to random line breaks and other inconsistencies that force the reader to puzzle out the flow, structure, and organization. A main step in moving into a final draft will be tidying up the presentation so the reader can focus on your well-crafted historical discussion."
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Kibin. (2024). Woodstock: a peaceful rock revolution. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/woodstock-a-peaceful-rock-revolution-DYN86M2k
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