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Dear Mr Daniels MY NAME IS DENESHA JANAY OATES A SOPHOMORE VETERINARY TECHNOLOGYMAJOR STRIVING TO BECOME A VETERINARIAN I AM A FULL-TIME STUDENT WITH A333 GPA AND A KNIT FOR HIGHER LEARNING MY EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIESINCLUDE BEING A FORT VALLEY STATE CHEERLEADER AND A MEMBER OF VETERINARYSCIENCE CLUB I BECAME INTERESTED IN VETERINARY TECHNOLOGY WHEN STRANGEDOGS WOULD COME UP TO ME AS IF THEY WERE DRAWN TO ME LIKE A LONG LOSTFRIEND I REALLY BECAME INTERESTED WHEN MY BLACK LAB WAS STRUCK BY A CAR INTHE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT AND I COULDNT DO ANYTHING TO SAVE HER WITH THEPASSING AWAY OF MY DOG I MADE A PROMISE TO MYSELF THAT I WOULD LEARNEVERYTHING ABOUT VETERINARY MEDICINE TO HELP OTHER ANIMALS SO THEY WOULDNTMEET THE SAME FATE MY DOG DID My career goals are to graduate with honors and a Bachelors Degree inVeterinary Technology and Animal Science with a minor in Biology Upongraduating from The Fort Valley State University I plan on attending TheUniversity of Georgia or Tuskegee University and enrolling in eithers DVMprogram With obtaining a Doctor of Veterinary Medicine degree I will setout to open up my own Veterinary practice in a small town then migrate to alarger area Another career goal is to become a positive role model in mycommunity I will give back to my school in forms of donations to help theschool grow and scholarships for the Veterinary Technology future students I have had a little experience in preparation for graduate
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