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A Letter to Americans About the Need for Better Gun Control

This is a short letter about the need for better gun control in the United States. The author mentions how England banned heavy weapons and how people should come together over this issue.
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K's feedback:

"Your focus in this letter is clear, and you begin your emotional call with some great, thought-provoking questions. There are a lot of interesting ideas here; this letter is a off to a good start. To make it stronger, please provide some support for your arguments. For example, you might want to use some statistics about the improvements in the safety of English citizens that occurred after 1996. Please also include a further development of your arguments. For example, you begin discussing the value of future generations, but do not follow up with this line of thinking. There are a few language issues here that should be addressed before submission to improve the readability of your essay."

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