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This letter is to the Loyola Law Admission Staff because I did notproperly fill out question number three in the Character and FitnessSection It was an error on my behalf because I failed to recall that Iwas put on academic probation my freshman year 2005-2006 The reason Iwas put on academic probation was because of a few reasons I wont make excuses I was not responsible my first year in college Ithought I could get good grades simple with talent instead of hard work I quickly found out that it was not possible to succeed in collegewithout hard work The second reason was I had not yet discovered mypassion Once I found my major Political Science my grades went updrastically I began to love school and attending my courses became apleasure I loved what I did The final reason was because of mathMath has always been a weak point of mine I am very stubborn andinstead of dropping the courses I would try to pass the math courses It is a big regret of mine that I did not drop the math courses that Iwasnt doing well academically in because it drastically affected myGPA I would like admissions staff to forgive me for not performing upto my standards but take into account that I did improve and I nevergave up in math I diligently worked hard and took tutoring to bettercomprehend the material I kept working on my math skills until Isuccessfully passed all my courses I hope the Admissions Committee willtake this into consideration when evaluating my application
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