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A Literary Analysis of Essay Hunger of Memory by Richard Rodriguez

This is a piece about Richard Rodriguez's essay, Hunger of Memory. The author highlights how Rodriguez believes that not many people go through the horrible educational experiences he went through but that his opinion is not valid.
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"This paper is off to an excellent start, and with a little more work put into the graded aspects of the paper, you will significantly improve it. First, the formatting of your document is perfect, which is essential because a neatly formatted paper enhances reading comprehension and the cohesiveness of the writing. Regarding the paper's organization, while you have included both an introduction and a conclusion, they could benefit from additional elaboration. The introduction needs a thesis statement that tells the reader what the paper's goal is and how you are going to go about achieving that goal. The conclusion should then summarize the main points you made in the body of the paper and relate them to the thesis statement. This will communicate the purpose of your paper more clearly, show the reader that you remained focused on that purpose throughout your writing, and give the body of your essay clear direction. Aligning the body of your paper with the thesis statement will also improve the content of your essay. Last, you have a reasonably good handle on writing conventions, which is essential for cohesiveness and reading comprehension. There are some grammar, word choice, and punctuation errors to be found, so make sure that you have your paper go through a round of proofreading to resolve these."

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