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Declaration Changes Most of the changes made to the declaration of independence were made for political reasons The United States did not want to jeopardize their possible future relations with Britain They also did not want the British people most likely their descendents to be angry with them The writers of the Declaration of Independence also made sure that they said He when they stated the reasons they felt they deserved Independence The first section of the Declaration of Independence was revised to give the justification for the Declaration of Independences existence It says that when a nation is created it owes world opinion an explanation why it is rejecting its former system of government The paragraph states three main ideas The phrase it becomes necessary is the first of countless reasons why the colonies have no choice but to separate The second point is that the people not government of the colonies are ending the relationship with the British It was revised to make is clear that it was the will of the people to end the relationship The third point that a new nation The United States is entitled to the same respect and authority separate and equal station as any other national power The middle of the Declaration of Independence is a list of charges against the King made by the colonists The colonists made the charges seem they were mad at their king as well as the British All of these were revised out so they charges were only against the king The reason that this was do was because the colonists did not want to make the British people mad
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