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Bridget's feedback:
"Excellent work. This essay makes clear your mastery of the topic in its details, concepts, and broad themes; further, the efficiency of the discussion and the control over the structure demonstrates your strengths as the writer and rhetor. Before your final submission, make sure your references appear at the end of the paper, per your style guide, to help the reader get a deeper sense of your work as the researcher (and rhetor); similarly, use your style guide resource to make adjustments to line spacing, subheading formatting, and other page elements for a polished and formal visual presentation. With the same goal in mind, use a final, careful proofread to catch a handful of minor typos or similar (including proper formatting of titles, e.g., The Economist).
Your control over the essay suggests a conscious decision not to include an introduction, but do consider the rhetorical situation and the role of the paper's finalized title in determining how helpful an introduction will be to the reader. I also notice mention of India in the conclusion, but no body discussion--is there a missing section? If not, consider the impact of introducing a last-minute element on the reader."
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Kibin. (2024). The cola wars: the globalization of pepsi and coke. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-cola-wars-the-globalization-of-pepsi-and-coke-IzXADCpj
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