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A Look at the Problems Faced by the City of Flint, Michigan

This essay addresses the many difficulties faced by the city of Flint, MI. The student argues that while the United States focuses on outside threats, it is letting its own cities deteriorate.
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Bob's feedback:

"The city of Flint is certainly facing a lot of challenges, and you've done a good job of summarizing them. Since this is a scholarly paper, be careful about using emotionally charged or obviously biased language. This also applies to informal clauses like "What if I tell you" and "If you haven't noticed by now," which make your essay sound more conversational and can undermine your credibility. In your intro, you argue that the biggest threats the United States faces come from inside. This is a good point, but you spend quite a bit of time on it and go into unnecessary detail. This leaves your reader wondering what the main idea of the essay will be. Finally, consider working with an editor to clean up awkward sentences and many grammatical errors."

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