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A Look at the Two Sides of the Abortion Debate

This essay presents both sides of the abortion debate, emphasizing women's right to control their lives, especially when a mother's life is in danger.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've done a good job of presenting the opposing sides of this argument and showing that each side has a moral reason for its stance. While it seems that you are advocating for reproductive rights, it's not entirely clear what your stance is. If you aim to take a position, make sure that this is clear and reinforced in your conclusion. As it stands, your conclusion cites Justice Ginsburg's stance but makes no mention of your own perspective.

Make sure you are clear when discussing statistics. You mention that 36% of women live in countries where abortion by demand is legal, then state that only 14% of women can have an abortion if their life is endangered. These statistics seem to contradict one another and should be clarified.

Pay attention to organization. You often jump from topic to topic.

There are several confusing and/or run-on sentences and some awkward phrasing that should be cleaned up."

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