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I blundered my way around the streets for a while longer wondering to myself if I was going in the right direction Finally I decided to stop and ask an elderly man for help outside City Hall He pointed for me and I walked parallel to his finger all the way to the entrance ramp I started walking hopelessly towards Kansas City as if I might be able to make it there on my own two feet if no one stopped My hand felt awkward as I lazily waved my thumb in the air to passer-byes Much to my surprise and clearly defeating what I had been told about hitching rides in the past a dark blue F-150 stopped within the first minute I ran up to it and told the man I was going to Kansas City and got in forgetting what I told myself earlier about memorizing the moment of seeing my first hitched ride stop twenty feet ahead of me The driver was middle-aged and fat with a strangely police looking mustache on his face As we drove and drove he talked and talked asking me question after question when all I wanted to do was hang my head back into the thick air of the truck and sleep We got into Johnson County and he dropped me off at a fork wished me luck in my adventures and rejoined the traffic I went my direction while walking backwards this time frantically flailing my thumb at the cars while they passed and left me in the dusty fumes of a highway Once again someone stopped for me shortly after I got onto the road and I bolted over to the Cadillac and jumped in She was a sexy Mexican with a big body and long brown hair We conversed for a little while and I fawned over her accent while we drove through downtown Kansas City She was so very nice that
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