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One time when I was 8 I was enjoying my time playing Super Mario 64 There was a loud shriek that came from my sisters room I remember it was like an earthquake when she was stomping towards me Suddenly She dived onto me I felt like that my bone had been shattered into pieces I tried to shove her off the sofa and focus on the game However her weight was too excessive for me to nudge her off I yelled out to my mom Mom Help Im dying My mom grabbed her arm and pulled her off me My mom lectures her while I quickly looked at television It said game over and I had an outbreak What do you want from me My sister looked at me while my mom said to relax She said that she wanted to play in the snow and I should play with her I immediately denied I noticed that she was about to plunge onto me I kicked her and we had an argument My mom stopped us and insisted for me to play outside I agreed since I didnt want any more drama A few moments later I walked outside with my sister and looked up to the sky The white and beautiful snow was so cold that a shudder of chills went down my spine Suddenly my sister pushed me into the snow My face landed right on the snow I rise and threw a snowball while my face numbs After a while my hands start to cringe and insisted to go inside My sister agreed I had to admit to my sister that I was absolutely exhilarated When we came inside I realized the warm that I longed for I called out to my mom Can we have hot cocoa with marshmallows
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