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A Message From an Angel I was thirty-seven weeks pregnant and only two weeks away from my due date It was a bright sunny Monday morning in July and I was already late for my doctors appointment I threw on my favorite sweat shorts and an XXXL tee shirt to cover my enhanced belly I rushed out the door deciding to take the short cut to the hospital I had to walk because I didnt have a car yet I wasnt complaining too much because my feet werent as swollen as they were the day before On my way to the hospital which was only a couple of blocks from my apartment I cut through an alley which lead to a shorter route to the hospital Through the corner of my eye a bright orange deflated balloon caught my attention The balloon was dangling from an old rusted fence with a hand written laminated note tied to the end of the balloons string I broke the string where it was so tattered and tore the note off I put the note in my pocket then I continued on my way On my way back home from the doctor I took out the note and read it It was a message to anyone to anyone who found the note to pray for their son Kraig Davis who had died in the Oklahoma City bombing At the end of the message it gave the address of Kraigs parents Finally I arrived at my apartment When I got upstairs I decided to write to the address that was written on the note I wrote a letter telling them that I will keep their son in my prayers and that God is watching over him and not to worry because they have an angel now that will take care of
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