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I stood at the edge of the field and looked as far as I could see Icouldnt see far because the untamed land had thick weeds taller thanme I wanted to walk down the narrow path cut out in the middle of it Iwanted to explore the unknown land that was just a few feet away Myfeet wouldnt move though I felt so small next to the fifty acres ofrural land It was incredible how quickly the world could change 100feet behind me was my grandmas house where she probably has snacksready for us inside Where as two feet in front of me was a field ofunknown I tried to muster every ounce of bravery I had within me tomake my feet move forward and into the field It must have workedbecause before I knew it I found myself moving forward and I couldntstop My curiosity had taken control of my body and was leading me downthe waving path Young trees and weeds towered over me and I was amazedhow quiet and peaceful it was Occasionally a small rabbit would dartacross the path and startle me but only for a second and I kept movingAfter a few minutes of walking I reached the opposite edge of the fieldand I found a large canal dividing the field I was in and another fieldThe sun was high in the sky and it felt like I was baking in the dryheat I decided it was time to return home so I began walking backWhen I returned to my grandmas house I stood on her porch and looked atthe field and wondered when I would go back PAGE
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