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Life is like an enormous theatrical performance each person having the leading role ready to determine hisher destiny For each event in your life you can reflect upon a stimulus a cause Yet there are so many events so many years days hours seconds in ones life Which is the one that one moment in time which knowingly or unknowingly changed your life to lead you to be just that you For many it is impossible to pinpoint that moment Yet for others that time place and situation sits implanted in their mind like a snapshot in time Picture if you will a plump young boy of age ten Never before had he been exposed to life outside his fifth grade classroom and his immediate family Timid and shy he decided he had listened to his mothers continuous nagging for the last time That weekend he would do as she said and just go to see an audition for the communitys production of the musical Oliver He arrived on time the hustle and bustle of signing in all very new to him There was no way he would actually get up on stage and sing for that skinny man with the clear acrylic braces showing on his teeth who was seated at the piano Yet he had struck a deal with his mom to wait and observe leaving at any time he felt he wanted to Twenty minutes later he watched his mother from a different perspective just a dot in a sea of other mothers sitting in the audience As he stood in that group of ten youngsters his meager vocabulary could not describe the fear in his body didnt know what a mark on his life the next few moments would make when he sang his heart out to the skinny man How would he have known that that man would be
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