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Red Alert It was a great day I realized as I woke up moving to a sitting position I stretched as soon as I stood up I couldnt believe what I saw There it was right in front of my face I closed my eyes I opened my eyes again to see if what I saw was true As I did so I felt cold air around my eyes I gasped trying to breathe I ran to the other mirror to make sure that the mirror in my room was lying My cheeks were red itchy and swollen I was getting dizzy thinking this was all a dream How could this have happened Yesterday was so great now today was like a nightmare I shook my head rapidly as if trying to get rid of my headache at the same time wishing this was all a dream My mom saw me Whats wrong What in the world happened to your face She asked concerned I dont know I woke up and it was like that She examined my face for what seemed like a minute Did you put any thing on it No Well dont put any thing on it Did you show your dad yet No I answered her angrily I walked to where my dad was sitting Look what happened to her He looked over at me What happened How should I know I answered him angrily Well what did you eat Just the crab from yesterday Well dont eat any to day My mom said But I love crab I groaned angrily an stomped back to my room I couldnt stop itching My mom passed by Stop scratching youll only make it worse Arggh I was getting frustrated I saw my sister staring at me What are you looking at I asked flatly What happened to your face Shut up What Im just asking I stormed off to the den My
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